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Prompt: What do you want to see inside of?
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Prompt: Make a modern translation of an old poem
The Albatross (Charles Baudelaire 1821-1867)
Often, just for fun, the sailors
Catch albatrosses, huge birds of the sea,
Who lazily follow along as travel companions
The ship gliding over bitter, yawning depths.
As soon as they’re set down on the wooden deck,
These kings of the sky, clumsy and ashamed,
Pitifully let their great white wings
Drag beside them like useless oars.
That winged traveler: how awkward and weak he looks!
Once so beautiful, now comic and ugly!
One sailor teases his beak with a pipe,
Another mocks him, limping like a cripple who once could fly.
The Poet is like this prince of the clouds,
Who haunts the storm and laughs at the archer;
Exiled on the ground, amid jeers and mockery,
His giant wings keep him from walking.
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The Classical Dancer
In the schoolyard, his classmates
mock him, copying
his graceful moves, his ethereal gaze,
with fake smiles and bent wrists.
He’s brilliant but doesn’t brag,
reads books instead of scrolling.
His voice is soft, almost a whisper.
No girlfriend. A little shy.
They invite him to parties
not because they want him there,
but because it’s funny to watch him
dance when the music isn’t his.
But alone in his room, the dancer
bare feet on the floor,
his body remembers better than words
that the world can’t reach him.
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Hey, I chose the poem 'L’Albatross' (an English version) by Charles Baudelaire, a very famous French poet. I love the contrast between the majesty and beauty of the albatross in the sky and its clumsiness on the ground, as well as the cruelty of the sailors.
I tried to imagine a similar situation in today’s world. I wanted to highlight how people who are different are often isolated and rejected in everyday life.
I’m sorry you can’t read the poem in French; the musicality of the verses and the strength of the metaphor are just beautiful.
Caroline
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schoolyard plowed dancing
salt my daughter kicks
Impatience
choices hover
my fingers drum
time drips
my foot jumps
they linger
I still wait
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Crowds
In high school every day, I was in a crowd where there was pushing and shoving to get to class, to get the lockers. Ducking, twisting and turning, it was impossible to get from point A to point B through all the teenage girls and boys. My sister saw me squirrel tunnels through the crowd. She couldn't believe how I got through so fast to make it in time for class. I was in a zone where it was stifling and I couldn't think. I just needed to make it through this maze, this labyrinth of adolescence coolness.
Debbie Strozier
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Prompt: Before ____ it was ____
Before it became a public library,
a haven for curious minds,
it was a home for modern art
a vibrant creative space.
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Prompt: what do you look up to see?
The sky is climbing and no one watches
it's slow descent into the ground
gravediggers feel cramped in this massive
jumbling of the soul
the solitary cell of the new cities
bangs against bulletproof windows
no echo rings in this birdless weather
and I feel cold in my five layers of oblivion
the parakeet I bought in the market last month
is afraid to speak, the sun
is too far for clouds.
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what is your poetry business's trueline and tagline? what does that tagline mean to people?
what are your consistent messages and images/associations?
how is your offer unlike anything else?
what is the journey someone goes on from being unfamiliar with you to being loyal?
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The day starts in darkness
The day starts in somber
It’s oh-oh-oh one on the clock
The day is born
When the day starts to grow
The night wants to say goodbye
A glass of water will touch your lips
It’s the night’s last kiss
It’s always 5am somewhere
It’s always time to make your first sip
Your sweetest sip
Spaghetti, my beloved pasta
I grab you between thumb and forefinger,
open my mouth and let you disappear
such a tasteful happiness.